Hello all,
I checked the calendar this morning, and yup, it is already the beginning of January! My students are writing up a storm; wild and blustery, but writing nonetheless. While the range of mastery is wide, the one constant recently is the motivation caused by our inquiry project. Seth and I have literally jumped into this project with a "yee hah" and a prayer, troubleshooting as we go, solving a variety of SKYPE snafus that have to do with audio and/or video, flurries of emails, blog barriers as simple as how the heck do you post and label, and the occasional frantic cell phone call at 10:18 a.m. while students all over the classroom yell into their mikes: "Can you hear me?"
Through it all, the students have embraced each other as they build this unlikely community of writers: hesitate 3rd graders who have an assortment of writing challenges including phonetic spelling and the proverbial "I'm all done", and AP English students who are working hard to draw the stories out of these young writers.
You can find our work at: aronsonauthors.blogspot.com
When you click on the student author's names you'll see a variety of writing they've done to date: personal narratives, and non fiction pieces with a focus on the Winter Solstice. You'll be able to read the Ap English students "praise and polish", and then in red text, the 3rd grade author's attempt at revision using their writing partners feedback.
A few comments overheard while the students were SKYPING:
"I just read the story about your little sister. I absolutely love how you went from talking about memories from the past with all of the dialogue (talking), to the future. That flowed really nice."
"Mr. Mitchell, I'm so proud of my partner!" ( She was impressed by her kiddo's revisions (Caleb) and felt so happy to be part of that growth.
" If I could have said one more thing to my Uncle before he died I would have said "I love you."
"I think that you could help the reader understand more about how you feel about your dog by mentioning what you like to do with your dog."
"My writing partner (Cassie) has a great laugh".
"I think you should try combining sentences because you have a lot of short sentences clumped together. For example, instead of saying “She lives with our fish, Swimy. He has a lot of energy.” You could say, “She lives with our fish, Swimy, and he has a lot of energy.” The sentences flow better that way, so try combing some more like that."
"I’m sorry your gram died, but maybe you could describe what she was like before she died."
Pretty amazing stuff, don't you think? Up next, realistic fiction and then onto In Pictures and in Words: an Illustration Study.
See you all in February! MICHELE